— UPDATE —

Here is the current layout. I have some ideas for the last couple shots. Do you all have any ideas for the cover shot?

Also, offer still stands with models. It can be ANYBODY.
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Tuesday, June 9, 2009

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15 comments:

  1. These statements are great the photos for them really need to be well planned. Good luck! -sky

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  2. I'm confused? Will there be pictures to go along with the statements? Very creative, though! I enjoyed reading them!

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  3. I really am enjoying the statements that you posted. It’s just that what I don’t understand is in what direction will you be going with the photos? Will you have somebody act out each statement in a photo?

    --Nick Miller

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  4. I got a same questions that caitlin's saying. Your statement is really good.

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  5. The personal statements are really interesting. I have the same question as Nick.

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  6. it's freddy kruger. my 5th grade teacher had the last name and i cried and barfed all night b/f the first day. they might sell the kruger sweater at hot topic (for photo sake).

    can't wait to see more.

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  7. why are some of the words different colors? i keep trying to make sentences out of just them... just something to think about.

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  8. by the was the last comment was by Ian

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  9. I'm also wondering about the emphasis on some words by making the red. The statements are strong and I can't wait to see what you do with the photographs that accompany them.

    -Sarah Whitfield

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  10. so, for your book, will the page on the left/right side have the text and then the page next to it have a photo to reinforce the idea?
    also, are these really epiphanys? i feel like the statements lack a bit of depth in order to carry out a significant message. i might be wrong. just keep working and tweeeeeeking.

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  11. You are getting there! The idea is growing stronger by the week! I cannot wait to see your images!

    val

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  12. I'm anxious to see the actual photographs. I also question the title of "epiphany." If these really are epiphanies in peoples lives then maybe it should be explained differently.

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  13. These stories are cute! I'm anxious to see what you do with the photos. I'm also interested to see how you design the book! Keep up the good work!

    Melissa :)

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  14. A few of these stories really made me laugh becuase they are so cute! I think the strongest stories are cupid, watching tv, and carrot cake. Those ones really stood out to me. Can't wait to see how you are going to take the photos to go along with the stories!

    Danielle

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  15. i think that this idea has a lot of potential, i am looking forward to seeing the photos to go along with the stories.
    alex

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